Active, Passive, and Passive-Aggressive Voice

We were teaching a class for Department of Interior personnel—mostly managers. Like lots of people, they’d heard about the evils of passive-voice sentences. Our goal was to make sure they understood the difference between active and passive voice, and recognized that each has its place.

After a short explanation, we moved on to examples. Passive-voice sentences can sometimes be strong and clear, so we talked about a couple of those. And as usual, we discussed some sentences that show why the passive voice has a bad reputation.

Then it was their turn to identify several new sentences as active or passive.

In some of these sentences, the person taking action concealed his identity by hiding behind the passive voice. Sentences like “Your loan application has been disapproved,” and “Your manuscript is hereby rejected.”

When we showed the class one particularly sneaky sentence, and asked for a volunteer to identify it as active or passive, a young man raised his hand.

“Yes?” I said, “which is it?”

“That sentence,” he said, “isn’t passive, and it isn’t active. What it is, is passive-aggressive.”

We all laughed, and agreed with him.

And so a new voice is heard from—and about.

 

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  • 6/25/2011 6:01 PM John wrote:
    This was interesting, but I would have found it much more interesting had you included the sentence that provoked the comment.
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    1. 7/6/2011 2:28 PM Dave wrote:
      Thanks for the comment--sorry to be so late getting back to you. 

      You're right--it would have made the post more interesting. Unfortunately, I couldn't remember the sentence, and haven't been able to find it in our workbooks. 

      I considered creating a new one, but thought it might be more interesting (and save me some work) if we invited you and other interested readers to submit examples of what they consider passive-aggressive-voice sentences.

      Again, thanks, sorry for the delay, keep in touch.
      Dave

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